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my first critique on DA so , i will try to be as methodical as i can . but let me start by saying that already on the thumb , i loved this photo .
first of all the boy , the way he faces the camera , the eye contact , the serious expression , the way he leans on the wall ! what else can we ask from a model ?
the cropping is good , fair composition , within the rules and it works great here ! the eye keeps coming back to the subject .
for the originality , it is difficult to be original here , but i don't think it is a must in this kind of photos .
the exposure and focus and all technical issues are good , i like the editing , not over done , and the natural colors !
i love this picture , mostly for the human factor in it .
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:iconabzyy:
Thank you , glad u liked it :D

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:iconanuksunamoon:
Abir i really love this one!the boy's pose and expression really set the mood of the photograph :heart:

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Nada, Thank you for loving it:) heheh !!
glad u liked it my frind :) :hug:

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Incredible shot, this is very powerful.
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thank you :)

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i am biased =D

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do you like my photos ! you should have seen the ones that i missed :ohmygod:
:iconabzyy:
hehe :) kif ye3ni ?

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i saw you requested a critique, and i am biased for you, badek yane kazzeb ya3ne !! =D bro7 3al nar ba3den

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do you like my photos ! you should have seen the ones that i missed :ohmygod:

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